tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post5904414689251306155..comments2023-10-26T16:32:53.318+08:00Comments on :: AKU,CINTA & CITA-CITA ::: .:: CERPEN : IZINKAN AKU BAHAGIA ::.Miss N™http://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-31745352449745053402013-10-09T01:09:03.272+08:002013-10-09T01:09:03.272+08:00Salam,cik nur..hehe baru perasan ni cik nur ada ka...Salam,cik nur..hehe baru perasan ni cik nur ada karya kat sini.bagus jugak ceritanya.geram pulak dgn Firas tak senonoh tu.haha.tapi tiba2 ada amir la..tersilap ke?Cendolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03738497523329682656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-35150587478882504662013-06-10T10:42:32.268+08:002013-06-10T10:42:32.268+08:00owh, cerpen, kalo buku tadi, bolehla Tedi promosi ...owh, cerpen, kalo buku tadi, bolehla Tedi promosi ke Mommy :)Tedi {interpretZZ}https://www.blogger.com/profile/05241932997975888202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-14097749012872942472013-03-17T21:19:45.640+08:002013-03-17T21:19:45.640+08:00menarik.ending pon best.
cma penggunaan tanda nokt...menarik.ending pon best.<br />cma penggunaan tanda noktah ketika dialog perlu perbaiki..<br /><br />amer tu sapa?ke typo...<br />cer bc blk... ;)QasehnyaRaniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929328307968823247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-71285151927671282942012-12-09T08:47:01.901+08:002012-12-09T08:47:01.901+08:00wow bagusnya ni, tak sangka laa... hebakkk! boleh ...wow bagusnya ni, tak sangka laa... hebakkk! boleh berkarya bagai lagi tuu... tahniah2... (baru perasan sory ya)jaakechikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14288747792753630571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-16026416950848324112012-11-16T00:34:09.640+08:002012-11-16T00:34:09.640+08:00tak sangka nur pandai berkarya. boleh ni buat cerp...tak sangka nur pandai berkarya. boleh ni buat cerpen hantar ke PTS. bila nak buat cerpen lagi? :)Chic Nahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03766584652372618420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-34477405100498834602012-07-27T11:56:13.896+08:002012-07-27T11:56:13.896+08:00di buli bertubi² ehhh. hehe. ;)di buli bertubi² ehhh. hehe. ;)9n0L4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07834514605094678366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-48962575072683151982011-04-27T10:12:49.180+08:002011-04-27T10:12:49.180+08:00terima kasih kak nisa.. :)terima kasih kak nisa.. :)Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-52586619647356773492010-08-09T16:37:05.935+08:002010-08-09T16:37:05.935+08:00cerita yang ni akak dah baca dulu . tapi tak titip...cerita yang ni akak dah baca dulu . tapi tak titip komen. Menarik , percubaan yang sangat baik.hanisah hassanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13845345821293809956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-65943202533040444522010-07-02T12:24:05.655+08:002010-07-02T12:24:05.655+08:00anonymous: t.kasih yaa..sudi menbaca :)anonymous: t.kasih yaa..sudi menbaca :)Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-82204388121242024902010-06-30T21:47:54.443+08:002010-06-30T21:47:54.443+08:00best2..chayo2x..best2..chayo2x..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-9032598115548235522010-06-23T21:23:14.498+08:002010-06-23T21:23:14.498+08:00t.kaseh sudi membaca..
wakakakaka....
kedua?? insy...t.kaseh sudi membaca..<br />wakakakaka....<br />kedua?? insyaALLAH...!!<br />perlu banyak yg diperbaiki lg ni..<br />ape2 pun..t.kaseh sudi mbaca.:)Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-47638136721105634452010-06-23T21:03:26.479+08:002010-06-23T21:03:26.479+08:00Tahniah ann...klu bt drama best gak ni..heheheh
N...Tahniah ann...klu bt drama best gak ni..heheheh<br /><br />Nk tnggu perahan otak kklong yg kedua plak..ecehh...hekkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-57683354163987333332010-06-23T18:08:48.197+08:002010-06-23T18:08:48.197+08:00T.kaseh Ana...
akak baru lg....
byk benda yg kena ...T.kaseh Ana...<br />akak baru lg....<br />byk benda yg kena dipbaiki....<br />insyaALLAH...akan cuba berusaha lepas ni..<br />chayok..!!<br />pe2 pun,t.kasih sekali lagi,<br />kerana sudi mbaca.Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-53953616512034009572010-06-23T17:37:24.379+08:002010-06-23T17:37:24.379+08:00akakkkkkkkkkk!! best3!! jalan citer dah best, and ...akakkkkkkkkkk!! best3!! jalan citer dah best, and sure akak leh improve lg insya Allah,,:)Rohanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07547772368568086623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-83044620058803652422010-06-22T16:50:07.819+08:002010-06-22T16:50:07.819+08:00t.kaseh kak NY...:)
saya masih belajar...:)
masih ...t.kaseh kak NY...:)<br />saya masih belajar...:)<br />masih byk kelemahan...<br />ape2 pun..T.kaseh sudi mbaca..:)Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-29346084968304414962010-06-22T16:31:46.375+08:002010-06-22T16:31:46.375+08:00tahniah...jalan cerita dan peggunaan ayat yang bai...tahniah...jalan cerita dan peggunaan ayat yang baik...<br />boleh diperbaiki...:)NusrahYahyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12760453392401351145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-48535491150556801652010-06-22T14:09:00.285+08:002010-06-22T14:09:00.285+08:00t.kaseh Kak Nur,
masih byk kelemahan saya...
masi...t.kaseh Kak Nur, <br />masih byk kelemahan saya...<br />masih bertakteh...<br />t.kaseh sekali lagi kerana sudi mbaca.Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-28320359283469576872010-06-22T13:53:13.274+08:002010-06-22T13:53:13.274+08:00permulaan yang bagus :)
tahniah..permulaan yang bagus :)<br />tahniah..katak hijauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15729514117096078656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-82595399806658066512010-06-22T00:51:51.717+08:002010-06-22T00:51:51.717+08:00t.kaseh hans.... insyaALLAH..
akan diperbaiki..:)t.kaseh hans.... insyaALLAH..<br />akan diperbaiki..:)Miss N™https://www.blogger.com/profile/01226868661577988125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518259253957783804.post-80853375946481141312010-06-22T00:02:09.912+08:002010-06-22T00:02:09.912+08:00hurm
ending last dia best
den dah baca habis
den p...hurm<br />ending last dia best<br />den dah baca habis<br />den pun bukanlah hebat mana<br />cuma penggunaan huruf besar haru diperbaikilah..<br />lagi satu ayat2 selepas dialog kena olah lebih bagus lagi<br />apa2pun besthanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03516206334006936037noreply@blogger.com